In response to Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers Prompt in 100 words
By Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris
“I’m not sure we’ve chosen the right place dear.”
“Why ever not husband, the sun warm, the water blue and the mountains will keep the cloudlettes in line,” wife admonished.
“Just a feeling I have wife, a feeling of deja vu if you will,” his edges growing darker, his grumblings much louder now.
“You’re leaking again husband,” wife giggled.
“I was sure we could make it over the mountain tops to the sea my wife, no matter, gather around everyone we go together!”
Rain fell, watering creatures great and small, tiny rivulets making their way to the sea.
Gypsie’s Wonderful World of Words 
Thank you so much Jilly! I’m so happy you enjoyed it.
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I love his darkening edges. What an original take.
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That is the one thing so far I haven’t read…a story told from the clouds! Great idea
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I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you! 😊
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Dear Ami,
A nice unique take on the prompt. Hope you’re feeling better soon.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle! Me too!
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I like the idea of clouds having voices.
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Lovely story, the water always finds its way.
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Thank you GH! 😊
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Simply delightful!
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Thank you Keith! When I get well, perhaps a recorded collaboration with you as dad thundercloud and myself as wife/mother cloud! 😉
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What a unique perspective you’ve taken. I love this little story,
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Thank you Bear! 😊
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Very nice to have such a nice ‘head in the clouds’ story to read. Well done, Gypsi.
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Thank you Bill!
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A world where the clouds come and go and also rain on us humble beings. Lovely.
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Thank you James.
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Charming 🙂
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Thank you Iain! 😊
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Thank you Sadje! ☺️
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Aww, a cute story Ami
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Thank you Sadje!
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