In response to Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers Prompt in 100 words

Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers
Photo Prompt by Bradley Harris

By Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

“I’m not sure we’ve chosen the right place dear.”

“Why ever not husband, the sun warm, the water blue and the mountains will keep the cloudlettes in line,” wife admonished.

“Just a feeling I have wife, a feeling of deja vu if you will,” his edges growing darker, his grumblings much louder now.

“You’re leaking again husband,” wife giggled.

“I was sure we could make it over the mountain tops to the sea my wife, no matter, gather around everyone we go together!”

Rain fell, watering creatures great and small, tiny rivulets making their way to the sea.


  1. Thank you so much Jilly! I’m so happy you enjoyed it.


  2. jillyfunnell says:

    I love his darkening edges. What an original take.

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  3. That is the one thing so far I haven’t read…a story told from the clouds! Great idea

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    1. I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you! 😊

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  4. Dear Ami,

    A nice unique take on the prompt. Hope you’re feeling better soon.



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  5. msjadeli says:

    I like the idea of clouds having voices.

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  6. GHLearner says:

    Lovely story, the water always finds its way.

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    1. Thank you Keith! When I get well, perhaps a recorded collaboration with you as dad thundercloud and myself as wife/mother cloud! 😉


  7. Bear says:

    What a unique perspective you’ve taken. I love this little story,

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  8. Bill says:

    Very nice to have such a nice ‘head in the clouds’ story to read. Well done, Gypsi.

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  9. James McEwan says:

    A world where the clouds come and go and also rain on us humble beings. Lovely.

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  10. Sadje says:

    Aww, a cute story Ami

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