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  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says:
    March 30, 2022 at 3:30 pm

    Such a short life… but O, so brilliant

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
      March 30, 2022 at 4:56 pm

      Yes, and the cherry blossoms too — Thank you for reading and responding Bjorn! 😊

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    2. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
      March 30, 2022 at 8:51 pm

      Yes, and the cherry blossoms too — Thank you for reading and responding Bjorn!

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  2. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
    March 30, 2022 at 1:22 am

    Hello Frank and thank you. I will have to research this and try to do as you suggest. 😊 Suggestions and advice always welcome!

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  3. Frank J. Tassone says:
    March 29, 2022 at 9:32 pm

    A lovely haiku. Have you considered adding a prose component? That would transform this poem into a haibun.

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  4. Keith's Ramblings says:
    March 29, 2022 at 11:37 am

    So much said in so few words.

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
      March 29, 2022 at 2:04 pm

      Thank you Keith! 😊

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  5. ben Alexander says:
    March 29, 2022 at 4:59 am

    a truly lovely haiku, Ami!

    Sincerely,
    David

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
      March 29, 2022 at 7:45 am

      Thank you so much David!! 😊

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  6. Sadje says:
    March 28, 2022 at 10:44 pm

    So scenic

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
      March 28, 2022 at 11:01 pm

      Thank you Sadje! 😊

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    2. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
      March 28, 2022 at 11:09 pm

      Thank you Sadje!

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      1. Sadje says:
        March 28, 2022 at 11:47 pm

        🌷

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  7. rothpoetry says:
    March 28, 2022 at 10:00 pm

    A very nice Haiku!

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
      March 28, 2022 at 10:05 pm

      Thank you so very much! 😊

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      1. rothpoetry says:
        March 29, 2022 at 10:01 am

        You are welcome!

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