Sky Blossoms

By (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

In response to photo prompt above provided by Frank J. Tassone for dVerse Poets Haibun Monday 3-28-22

prone beneath a tree
cherry blossoms frame the sky
around me dying

16 Comments

  1. rothpoetry says:

    A very nice Haiku!

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      1. rothpoetry says:

        You are welcome!

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  2. a truly lovely haiku, Ami!

    Sincerely,
    David

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    1. Thank you so much David!! 😊

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  3. So much said in so few words.

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  4. A lovely haiku. Have you considered adding a prose component? That would transform this poem into a haibun.

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  5. Hello Frank and thank you. I will have to research this and try to do as you suggest. 😊 Suggestions and advice always welcome!

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  6. Such a short life… but O, so brilliant

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    1. Yes, and the cherry blossoms too — Thank you for reading and responding Bjorn! 😊

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    2. Yes, and the cherry blossoms too — Thank you for reading and responding Bjorn!

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