Gypsie’s Wonderful World of Words

Shakespeare published 154 sonnets in his quarto in 1609. While the initial 126 are addressed to a young man, the final 28 are directed toward an enigmatic woman referred to as the dark lady.

Taboo

(Adult Content)

In response to bwarren’s
The Sunday Whirl Wordle #606

Submissive heat
red hot
surrounded him

Parched from abstinence
misty past memories
engulfed him

Only the chill
of unending yearning
upset him

Distant memories
and past exploitations
haunted him

3 responses to “Taboo”

  1. The Inkwell (Pankaj Kumar) Avatar
    The Inkwell (Pankaj Kumar)

    Your ability to utilize concise and evocative language effectively captures the inner turmoil and profound longing within the passage. The strategic placement of contrasting elements such as submissive heat, parched abstinence, and unending yearning enhances the emotional depth conveyed. Furthermore, the inclusion of haunting distant memories and past exploitations intensifies the overall impact, showcasing your adeptness in creating powerful imagery. Well done in crafting such a resonant piece of writing. 👍👏👌😊

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      I am very honored. Thank you Pankaj Kumar of The Inkwell! 🙏

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      1. The Inkwell (Pankaj Kumar) Avatar
        The Inkwell (Pankaj Kumar)

        You’re most welcome. 😊

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