Redemption

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In response to Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt #320: This weekend your
challenge is to write a poem or a piece of prose in exactly 70 words using the word “Dejected”.

Dejection settled in his heart. It was Saturday and the people traipsed by, not sparing him a glance. He never bothered to lift his head any more, only opening dark amber eyes to track shoes shuffling across the concrete floor.

Rejection seared a pain in his chest as they filed out. All except one. The little girl stood in front of his cage and proclaimed, “That one! He is mine!”

13 responses to “Redemption”

  1. This has such a lovely and sweet ending ❤

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  2. Love this story, such a great ending ❤️

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    1. Thank you so much my friend! 😊

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  3. A heartwarming story

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    1. Thank you Sadje! Hope you are feeling better?? 🙏

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      1. Yes quite better than last night. Thanks Ami

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  4. Oh! So sad but yes!! A lovely ending 😁💜💜

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