Redemption

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In response to Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt #320: This weekend your
challenge is to write a poem or a piece of prose in exactly 70 words using the word “Dejected”.

Dejection settled in his heart. It was Saturday and the people traipsed by, not sparing him a glance. He never bothered to lift his head any more, only opening dark amber eyes to track shoes shuffling across the concrete floor.

Rejection seared a pain in his chest as they filed out. All except one. The little girl stood in front of his cage and proclaimed, “That one! He is mine!”

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13 responses to “Redemption”

  1. sammicoxwriter Avatar

    This has such a lovely and sweet ending ❤

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  2. Nicole Smith Avatar

    Love this story.

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  3. poetisatinta Avatar

    Love this story, such a great ending ❤️

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much my friend! 😊

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  4. Sadje Avatar

    A heartwarming story

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you Sadje! Hope you are feeling better?? 🙏

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        Yes quite better than last night. Thanks Ami

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  5. willowdot21 Avatar

    Oh! So sad but yes!! A lovely ending 😁💜💜

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      1. willowdot21 Avatar

        a pleasure 💜

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