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Deep Blue

Written by

Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

in

Azure Sea

By Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

Response to Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt #236 BLUE 38 Word Challenge

Colors all around

swirl without a sound

Upon the deep blue sea

azure water calls to me

Enter here and wish no more

magic found upon my shores

Leave your woeful cares behind

Sirens call made you mine

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11 responses to “Deep Blue”

  1. Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
    Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

    Thank you so much Dora!

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  2. dorahak Avatar
    dorahak

    Ah, the siren call of the sea! Who can resist it, especially the way you’ve described it? Magical indeed.
    pax,
    dora

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  3. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    The sea can be extremely alluring. A delightfully different take.

    My 38 words!

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  4. Michael B. Fishman Avatar
    Michael B. Fishman

    Yikes! You’ve made me want to second guess any motivation I might have for wanting to be near water! But leaving my woes behind is such an attractive thought that maybe I’ll… just this one time…

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    1. Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

      Watch out for those Siren’s Michael!

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  5. Sunra Rainz Avatar
    Sunra Rainz

    A lovely take on this prompt, Ami 🙂

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    1. Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Sunra! 🌊

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      1. Sunra Rainz Avatar
        Sunra Rainz

        You are most welcome 🙂

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  6. Bill Avatar
    Bill

    Love your little poem, Gypsie.

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    1. Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Bill! I love the minimum word challenges! 😊

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      1. Bill Avatar
        Bill

        You’re welcome.

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