Cloudtalk

In response to Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers Prompt in 100 words

Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers
Photo Prompt by Bradley Harris

By Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

“I’m not sure we’ve chosen the right place dear.”

“Why ever not husband, the sun warm, the water blue and the mountains will keep the cloudlettes in line,” wife admonished.

“Just a feeling I have wife, a feeling of deja vu if you will,” his edges growing darker, his grumblings much louder now.

“You’re leaking again husband,” wife giggled.

“I was sure we could make it over the mountain tops to the sea my wife, no matter, gather around everyone we go together!”

Rain fell, watering creatures great and small, tiny rivulets making their way to the sea.

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22 responses to “Cloudtalk”

  1. Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you so much Jilly! I’m so happy you enjoyed it.

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  2. jillyfunnell Avatar

    I love his darkening edges. What an original take.

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  3. Stine Writing Avatar

    That is the one thing so far I haven’t read…a story told from the clouds! Great idea

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    1. Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      I’m so glad you liked it. Thank you! 😊

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  4. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Ami,

    A nice unique take on the prompt. Hope you’re feeling better soon.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  5. msjadeli Avatar

    I like the idea of clouds having voices.

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  6. GHLearner Avatar

    Lovely story, the water always finds its way.

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    1. Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you Keith! When I get well, perhaps a recorded collaboration with you as dad thundercloud and myself as wife/mother cloud! 😉

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  7. Bear Avatar
    Bear

    What a unique perspective you’ve taken. I love this little story,

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  8. Bill Avatar

    Very nice to have such a nice ‘head in the clouds’ story to read. Well done, Gypsi.

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  9. James McEwan Avatar

    A world where the clouds come and go and also rain on us humble beings. Lovely.

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  10. Sadje Avatar

    Aww, a cute story Ami

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