Natural Saunter

By Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

Response to Weekend Writing Prompt #246: This weekend your challenge is to write a poem or a piece of prose in exactly 51 words using the word Saunter.

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What is it about a man’s walk that turns my own legs to jelly, sets my heart a flutter and keeps my eyes locked on his retreating form?

Not an arrogant, false or defensively combative saunter. It’s the natural saunter of a man who knows he’s a man. Oh yes!

14 Comments

  1. Reena Saxena says:

    I’ve read women look at the jaws first 🙂

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  2. I can’t say as that’s something overly noticed! 😉

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  3. You like to see them leaving? Just kidding. I get it. It’s the gait. Mmhmm.

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  4. Bill says:

    Well done. I will keep all this, including comments, in mind. Fun run, Gypsie.

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  5. Why is Walk Like a Man suddenly haunting me?

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  6. writingwhatnots says:

    Is it the gait, or the derriere? 😉

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  7. Definitely the whole body gait! 🥰

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  8. Sunra Rainz says:

    Ha ha, Ami! A good observation and a great poem (I totally agree) 🙂

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  9. Dale says:

    Oh yes, some of that nonchalant, confident saunter indeed.

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