Nibble

By Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

Response to prompt word NIBBLE posted by Mish at dVerse Poet’s Club

44 word limit challenge

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The sunset washed over us as though the rays were liquid gold, intwining our slightly browned skin into one solid, substantial aura.

He was the one! I felt a warm nibble on my chilled ear. A woman moved toward us.

“Who’s that?”

“My wife.”

16 Comments

  1. fireblossom32 says:

    Hi Gypsie. You liked to my word list prompt last Monday but your link only led to a title page and no poem. No matter where I clicked, nothing more appeared, so i had to remove the link and I didn’t know how to let you know the link was not working.

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    1. Hi. My apologies. I think I have fixed it now. Thank you for letting me know. 😊

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  2. Oh my apologies! I’m not very good at this linking thing. Did this one work ok? Your prompts are definitely inspiring. Thank you for posting them. 😊

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  3. Well that love story didn’t end well. Nicely done poem.

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  4. Thank you very much Arcadia! 😊

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  5. Sadje says:

    Oops! Good one Ami.

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  6. Mish says:

    A beautiful setting….until they are caught in the act and this quadrille takes a major turn. Nicely done.

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  7. Oy vey! I wonder what sort of drama ensued 🙂

    -David

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    1. Hi David, I wouldn’t want to be in any of their sandals!

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  8. writingwhatnots says:

    Haha- I didn’t see that coming!

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    1. Glad I surprised you and you enjoyed it! 😊

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  9. I am sure this will not end well… love the surprise.

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    1. Thank you for reading my work Bjorn! Your work is exquisite! 😊

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