Crumbling Home

By (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

In response to PHOTO PROMPT provided
by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields for
Friday Fictioneers!
PHOTO © Rochelle Wisoff-Fields

Persephone and Athena
Two sisters of yore
Together mourned
the loss of their home

Millennia had come and millennia had gone since Zeus and Hera’s
home this had been with
many godly children born within

Zeus rose stones thirty times
his weight encrusting jewels
into the massive castle gates
and crystals throughout within

But the likes of men and the likes
of war Zeus considered not at all
and now their home of long ago is naught but fallen crumbling rock

Comments

9 responses to “Crumbling Home”

  1. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Ami,

    It seems the gods don’t have it all that easy. 😉 Nicely written verses.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  2. James McEwan Avatar

    A well crafted descripted poetry, which I enjoyed reading.

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you James! Very happy you enjoyed! 😊

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  3. Jaya Avendel Avatar

    Loving the mythological feels woven into this piece!

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Very pleased you enjoyed it Jaya! 😊

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  4. Bill Avatar

    Such are the trials faced when Gods fall from favor. Well done, Gypsie.

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Most assuredly! Thank you Bill! 😊

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