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Sky Blossoms

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Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

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By (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

In response to photo prompt above provided by Frank J. Tassone for dVerse Poets Haibun Monday 3-28-22

prone beneath a tree
cherry blossoms frame the sky
around me dying

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16 responses to “Sky Blossoms”

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar
    Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

    Such a short life… but O, so brilliant

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Yes, and the cherry blossoms too — Thank you for reading and responding Bjorn! 😊

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    2. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Yes, and the cherry blossoms too — Thank you for reading and responding Bjorn!

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  2. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
    (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

    Hello Frank and thank you. I will have to research this and try to do as you suggest. 😊 Suggestions and advice always welcome!

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  3. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
    Frank J. Tassone

    A lovely haiku. Have you considered adding a prose component? That would transform this poem into a haibun.

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  4. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    So much said in so few words.

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Keith! 😊

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  5. ben Alexander Avatar
    ben Alexander

    a truly lovely haiku, Ami!

    Sincerely,
    David

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much David!! 😊

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  6. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    So scenic

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Sadje! 😊

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    2. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Sadje!

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      1. Sadje Avatar
        Sadje

        🌷

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  7. rothpoetry Avatar
    rothpoetry

    A very nice Haiku!

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so very much! 😊

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar
        rothpoetry

        You are welcome!

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