Luminous Glow

By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

CANDLE IN THE WINDOW — FENNO HOUSE c 1725 — Old Sturbridge Village, November 17, 2019 – Photo RAY BOAS

In response to Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing prompt #257 LUMINOUS
The challenge is to write a poem or a piece of prose in exactly 30 words using the word “Luminous.”

Luminous is the bright flickering
candle’s flame in the window
guiding you home to me

Luminosity fills our hearts
full of compassion and care
lights the flame of our lives

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11 responses to “Luminous Glow”

  1. ben Alexander Avatar

    Oh, Ami – this is so sweet. You didn’t need more than 30 words.

    Sincerely,
    David

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much sweet David! 🕊

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  2. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you so much Bill! 😊

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  3. Bill Avatar

    That is lovely, Gypsie. 🙂

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      1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

        Thank you most kindly Michael! ☺️

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much Di! 😊

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    2. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you my friend. 😊

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Honored again. Thank you for your care! ❤️

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