The Outcry

By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

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In response to Sammi Scribbles Weekend Writing Prompt #261 in 65 words exactly.

Far below a noise began
slight and distant and
barely discernible

Moons circled their planets
and black holes grew
Millenniums passed by

Sound rose in volume
a shattering crescendo
Past eons of galaxies

Darkness fades to black
black to purple to blue and red
Blood red obscures the sound

The outcry surged forth carried
by fear grief anger and angst
Unheard in the heavenly mix

https://sammiscribbles.wordpress.com/2022/05/28/weekend-writing-prompt-261-outcry/

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7 responses to “The Outcry”

  1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you so much Sunra! 😊

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  2. Sunra Rainz Avatar

    “Unheard in the heavenly mix” – love that last line. Enjoyed this, Ami 🙂

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  3. poetisatinta Avatar

    Really loved this poem really demonstrated for me the circularity of life within the universe thank you

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you most kindly my friend! 😊

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      1. poetisatinta Avatar

        You are very welcome 🙂

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  4. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you so much Willow. I appreciate your comments and input greatly! 😊

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  5. willowdot21 Avatar

    Excellent poem 💜

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