Thunderstorm Magic

By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

W3 Poem Prompt #8
Wea’ve Written Weekly
Hosted by The Skeptics Kaddish

Use the first words of the poem from Kunjal called ‘Rain,’ which have to appear at the end of each line with no more than sixteen lines.

“His first rain, from a little scrawny window, droplets pattering and dew forming,”

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The thunderstorm raged around his
parasol, yet not a single first
touch of wet frigid rain
fell on his umbrella received from

someone extraordinarily special if a

tad timid in his bearing and a little
self-conscious about his scrawny

body, which is a groovy window
to the gents soul. Unseen droplets
flow from the umbrella pattering

away from his feet, his arms and
his entire body, pools of dew
from his walk become rivers forming

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24 responses to “Thunderstorm Magic”

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    […] Ami, chose me as Poet of the week for David’s W3, for my poem Slavery. […]

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  2. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you! You are the best! 😊

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  3. ben Alexander Avatar

    W3 Prompt #10: Wea’ve Written Weekly

    Hi, Ami❣️

    I just want to let you know that this week’s W3, hosted by our beloved Punam, is now live!

    Take care,
    David

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  5. larry trasciatti Avatar

    Fine imagery. Only someone extra special could have done him such a fab turn

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Hi Larry, Thank you and most certainly! 😊

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  7. poetisatinta Avatar

    A great poem full of energy and great as a prompt too 🙂

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  9. ben Alexander Avatar

    Ami,

    Kunjal has selected your poem (‘Thunderstorm Magic’) as this week’s W3 prompt! Mazal tov!

    Could you please email me one or two guidelines for your prompt in the next day or two?

    Thanks so much,
    David

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Quite honored and certainly!
      😊

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    2. ben Alexander Avatar

      Ami, if it’s easier for you than email, you can respond to me with your prompt guidelines here.

      I’ll need them by Tuesday if possible.

      Much love,
      David

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  10. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you so much Punam!! (Hoping I spelled that correctly) 😊

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  11. paeansunplugged Avatar

    Wonderful imagery, Ami! ❤️

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  12. Duo Disseminators Avatar

    wow! The imagery in my mind is coming out strong! Great piece!
    ~Kunjal

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much Kunjal! 😊

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    2. ben Alexander Avatar

      I second Kunjal! I love your vivid imagery in this piece, Ami! Also, the line breaks work so well!!


      David

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      1. Duo Disseminators Avatar

        Hello Ami i have selected your poem as the prompt poem of the week! Congratulations!
        I really enjoyed the imagery throughout. pools of dew
        from his walk become rivers forming

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