Somebody – Anybody?

By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

Slit – Image by KL Caley

In response to WRITEPHOTO – Slit
Hosted by KL Caley

Days hot and long
How long, unknown
No stone to mark the walls
Not a single straw to mark a year

High above a slit
Days pass by and nights
Slide through it without relief
Hands grow gnarled hair is thinning

Bitter loneliness arrives
Depression anger disbelief all
Left so many nights ago unmarked
Somebody anybody know I’m here?

19 responses to “Somebody – Anybody?”

  1. […]  Somebody – Anybody? – Gypsie’s Wonderful World of Words […]

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  2. What a beautiful, poignant piece, Ami. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I hope all is well with you. Take care. Thank you for another fantastic entry to #writephoto. KL ❤

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    1. Thank you KL – I’m truly honored. I am ok, battling chronic health issues is all and once in a while feel trapped by them. I’m surviving though. Thank you for asking! 💜

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  3. Wowza, this is so good…yet so heartbreaking and relatable. Take good care of YOU, and may God bless you with all that you need.

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    1. Thank you so very much Leyde! 🙏

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      1. You are most welcome, my dear💙

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  4. Certainly understandable Dwight. I can’t believe the news isn’t carrying what is truly going on over there. It’s disgusting that a celebrity divorce gets 100% more coverage than the slaying of innocent people.

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  5. This poem reminded me of those soldiers over in the Ukraine, hiding behind broken walls!

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  6. Thank you Willow. There are many, many types of prisons in life for sure. Thank you for always participating and commenting, I appreciate it greatly!! 🙏

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  7. Ami, I feel the despair and resignation 💜💜

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  8. This is poignant, Ami! Such heartbreaking loneliness…

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    1. Yes …. But glad and thankful you read and responded Di! 🙏

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  9. Such a heartbreaking story

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    1. Very thankful for your comments and readings Sadje! 🙏

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      1. It’s always my pleasure

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