Thrown Away

In response to prompt provided by Sadje – “What Do You see #147

Thrown away
Tossed overboard
Into a roiling sea
of pain
of heartache

Sinking deep
Waves of despair
Clog the nose
fill the lungs
with sorrow

No perch
Liquid foundation
Undulating underneath
struggling for
lost stability

Voice muted
Disimpassioned ears
Ignore cries for help
anonymity engulfs
faded away


  1. Very good imagery. Sometimes I feel like my life has a liquid foundation.

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    1. Thank you kindly Brandon! 😊

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  2. willowdot21 says:

    I feel the dispare here 💜

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    1. Thank you for reading and commenting Willow – I honestly appreciate your posts.

      Hey! Pretty new hair-do?!? I like it!!


      1. willowdot21 says:

        Thank you 💜 on both counts . I appreciate you visiting too 💜

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  3. Wow! This is so good, Ami…you bring the pic alive with your words.

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  4. Nope, Not Pam says:

    You’ve captured the essence of the photo perfectly. A real sense of abandonment

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    1. Thank you so very much! 🙏

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  5. Sadje says:

    Such a poignant and sad poem Ami. Thanks a lot for joining in.

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      1. Sadje says:

        My pleasure


  6. Thank you for the read and comment JeanMarie! 😊


  7. JeanMarie says:

    Oh wow. So sad.

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