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Avian Away

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By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

In response to Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt #275: This weekend your challenge is to write a poem or a piece of prose in exactly 29 words using the word Avian

Avian oh Avian
Wish that I were one

Going out to play
Having lots of fun

To fly way up in the sky
As far away as the sun

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9 responses to “Avian Away”

  1. Bill Avatar
    Bill

    A lovely poetic piece, Gypsie. Nicely done.

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much Bill! 😊

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  2. Nope, Not Pam Avatar
    Nope, Not Pam

    Love it, you said so much in so few words

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much Deb! 🙂

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  3. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
    Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

    Oh I love it! Thank you Willow! 😊

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  4. willowdot21 Avatar
    willowdot21

    Help me out, said the eagle to the dove
    I’ve fallen from my nest so high above
    Oh, help me fly, I am too afraid to try
    Now set up in the fear of heights
    I’m praying you can set me right?
    Lyrics from Minnow and the Trout by Fine Frienzy.

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  5. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    Oh yup be free as a bird.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      A big bird of prey …. not a prey bird!! Feel like I’ve been prey my whole life! LOL

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      1. Sadje Avatar
        Sadje

        Whatever makes you free.

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