Lost In A Bottle

By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

Crimson’s Creative Challenge #200 #Consequences Posted by Bob Fairfield

Little did she know
Had she known
A monumental
Error she would make

She would never
Not even have ever
Popped herself in there
In her kinetic frenzy

The bottle neck
Unholy diminutive
No handholds
No footholds to get out

Her destiny
Now unfolds
The consequence
Of impulsivity

To be trapped
Within this cell
Of glass to float
For all eternity


  1. Wonderfully enigmatic!


  2. Nope, Not Pam says:

    Love it, you had me guessing 😊

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Sadje says:

    Oh no! A genie in a bottle?

    Liked by 1 person

      1. Sadje says:


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      2. 🧚🏻‍♀️🧚🏽🧚🏾‍♂️

        Liked by 1 person

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