The Path

By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

In response to dVerse Poets Pub
Prosery Prompt Piece 144 Words
to include – “I’d like, too, to plant the sweet alyssum that smells like honey and peace.”

Oakwood Cemetery


Walking the long winding path to the plot where my father lay. We stood hand in hand gazing
down at the flattened mound covered in soft green grass.

The breeze gentle, the sun warm but not hot
on our necks bent in reverence. The double tombstone bore his name, birth and death date.

The other side of the massive granite monolith was engraved with mother’s name and birthdate. The script upon the gleaming white stone sat in
silence awaiting the date of her death.

“Soon I will be laying here beside my love. I’d like, too, to plant the sweet alyssum that smells like honey and peace here above us.” We planted that very day.

I walk alone along the winding paths of the vast cemetery. A breeze lifts the hair from my neck, delivering the scent of sweet alyssum blossoms to my nose.

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18 responses to “The Path”

  1. msjadeli Avatar

    Loving take on the prompt line, Gypsie.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much my friend! ❤️

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re very welcome 🙂

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  2. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    PS: Just re-arrange the lines in prose form. Thank you 💘

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  3. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    This is beautifully composed, Gypsie. A small request though, the prompt asks for prose. Would you be kind enough to change it? (You don’t need to link again but please redo)

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  4. Nitin Lalit Avatar

    Beautiful and touching. I loved this lyrical poem.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you most kindly Nitin Lalit. 😊

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  5. rothpoetry Avatar

    A beautiful story, Ami. Flowers do help to ease the pain of loss!

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Ease of pain, introduction of love, forgive me please and farewell – flowers convey it all! 🥀🥀🥀

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  6. Nope, Not Pam Avatar
    Nope, Not Pam

    How beautiful 😊

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much Deb!
      ☺️

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  7. Sadje Avatar

    Beautiful and heartfelt poem!

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re most welcome

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  8. OIKOS™- Art, Books & more Avatar

    Thanks as well, Gypsie! Enjoy your day! xx Michael

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Michael, you are a blessing! 🙏

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