Smooth Rain

By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

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In response to Bartholomew Barker’s Monday Poetry Prompt Word – SMOOTH.

Upon your silvery green leaves
raindrops slide joyfully
Bouncing once – twice
then soaking into the ground
toward the outstretched roots
of blossoming flowers

The crystalline beads fall from above
a dance of life-giving merriment
A smooth iridescent drink
of clear Earth Mother’s milk
Replenishing all it touches with
rejuvenated vigor and health

Saturating fields and gardens
meadows too with soothing essence
Touching the withered with magic
making that which is green brighter
Calling forth sprouts and stems
into the light of a brand new day

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8 responses to “Smooth Rain”

  1. paeansunplugged Avatar

    So beautiful, Ami!

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  2. Bartholomew Barker Avatar

    Thanks for writing to the LP prompt!

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  3. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you so much my friend! 🙏

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  4. Sadje Avatar

    This is beautiful Ami.

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  5. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    So happy you found it so! 😊

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  6. ~just a thought Avatar
    ~just a thought

    “Smooth”, embodied within this soothing poem

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    1. ts19page Avatar

      This is just beautiful, the rain as sustenance, and the quiet tone!

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      1. ~just a thought Avatar
        ~just a thought

        💙

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