Gypsie’s Wonderful World of Words

Redo

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Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

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By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

100 words

Photo by Rochelle

In response to Rochelle Wisoff’s Photo Prompt Response in Exactly 💯 Words!

I passed by the antique shop every day, never entering the crowded menagerie of over-used items leftover from the past.

This day was different. The compulsion to go inside so strong, my feet turned toward the shop. I found myself standing inside, surrounded by mounds of aged household paraphernalia.

A tiny woman pressed a green wooden clock into my hands, saying this was what I was looking for.

Warmth enveloped me. Memories flooded my mind. I wished I could turn back time and make things right.

I reached for the hour hand and slowly began to turn it backward.

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30 responses to “Redo”

  1. Alicia Jamtaas Avatar
    Alicia Jamtaas

    This is one of my favorites this week. Thank you!

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Alicia! I’m so happy you enjoyed it! 😊

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  2. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    Gypsie, I thought about picking out one of the items in this and writing a story around it. I like what you did with that object. Also, I can relate to being “called” to go somewhere.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much Ms Jade! Yes, being called or led to something happens quite frequently. ❤️

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      1. msjadeli Avatar
        msjadeli

        You’re very welcome 🙂

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  3. granonine Avatar
    granonine

    If only it were that easy. . . . .unless that little clock had a super power!

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Almost certainly it did … or will! 😉

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  4. Bill Avatar
    Bill

    An interesting story, Gypsie. The intrigue of the green clock. 🙂

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Yes, all kinds of story-lines there; don’t you think Bill? Thank you for the read and compliment!! 😊

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      1. Bill Avatar
        Bill

        I do. And you’re welcome.

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  5. rochellewisoff Avatar
    rochellewisoff

    Dear Ami,

    This sounds like the intro to an adventure. Nicely done.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Rochelle. I’m seriously considering turning it into a group effort – a community novel to submit for publishing. 😊

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  6. poetisatinta Avatar
    poetisatinta

    Perfect start to a novel 🙂

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Definitely! Maybe a group effort! That would be fun!! ❤️

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      1. poetisatinta Avatar
        poetisatinta

        Yes indeed it would 🙂

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  7. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
    Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

    Thank you so very much for your read and lovely comment!! 🙂

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  8. authorfleurl Avatar
    authorfleurl

    I’m with the others…what happened next? This also has huge potential to be a bigger story! A lovely read 🙂

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  9. Hammad Rais Avatar
    Hammad Rais

    I would definitely do the same with an clock. A good read this is 🙂

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much Hammad! 😊

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  10. CGraith Avatar
    CGraith

    This has such a natural, smooth flow to it, I expected it to keep going! Definitely at the top of the list for best!

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Hi and thank you so very much! Honored that you enjoyed it so much! Had to stop at 100 words! ☺️

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  11. Keith's Ramblings Avatar
    Keith’s Ramblings

    We can only hope her wish came true.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Wouldn’t that be wonderful! 🙏

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  12. James McEwan Avatar
    James McEwan

    Ah, the magic of a time traveler clock. A great ending.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you most kindly James! ☺️

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  13. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    Very intriguing beginning Ami. What happens next?

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Sadje! 100 words makes for a great inquiry letter, yes? 😉

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      1. Sadje Avatar
        Sadje

        Indeed they do.

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  14. neilmacdon Avatar
    neilmacdon

    I wanted to know what happened next

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Hi Neil and thank you! 100 words is very short, yes? 😊

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