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Ashes

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By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

In response to bwarren’s The Sunday Whirl
Wordle #58

Light from the burning flame
split my world apart
The walls fell around me

Ashes snaked between
a gap forged in my own
numb longing heart

Reaching out I touch
the charred remains of my life
the remnants slip through my fingers

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7 responses to “Ashes”

  1. pensitivity101 Avatar
    pensitivity101

    Loved this Ami

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much. Hope you and yours are feeling better? ❤️

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        pensitivity101

        We’re making progress…………. I think! Thanks Ami

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        Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

        That’s a good thing! ❤️

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    Sadje

    Excellent poem Ami.

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Sadje! You are the best! 🙏❤️🙏

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        Sadje

        My pleasure Ami

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