Engrave

By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

In response to Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt – #289 – ENGRAVE in 23 words

Engrave upon my soul
love’s deep
everlasting communion
of heart

Lest one day
it’s taken away
that I might remember
love’s comforting warmth

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Bill says:

December 13, 2022 at 6:01 pm

Lovely poem, Gypsie.

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1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
  
  December 13, 2022 at 6:15 pm
  
  Thank you so much Bill! 😊
  
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Susan St.Pierre says:

December 10, 2022 at 2:16 pm

So poignant in 23 words. Bravo!

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1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
  
  December 10, 2022 at 9:06 pm
  
  Thank you so much Susan! 🙏
  
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pensitivity101 says:

December 10, 2022 at 1:08 pm

Beautiful Ami

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1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
  
  December 10, 2022 at 9:08 pm
  
  Thank you so much Di!! ❤️
  
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  1. pensitivity101 says:
    
    December 11, 2022 at 9:45 am
    
    You’re welcome
    
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poetisatinta says:

December 10, 2022 at 12:33 pm

Beautiful – ‘Love’ is definitely the great communicator ❤

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1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
  
  December 10, 2022 at 9:08 pm
  
  Yes! Thank you as always for reading and your lovely comments! 😊
  
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Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:

December 10, 2022 at 7:28 am

Thank you my friend! ❤️

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Sadje says:

December 10, 2022 at 6:00 am

Beautiful and touching

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Jane Aguiar says:

December 10, 2022 at 5:14 am

Beautiful poetry,Gypsie!

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1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris says:
  
  December 10, 2022 at 7:27 am
  
  Thank you so much Jane! 😊
  
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