Grief

By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

Dreamstime.com

In response to dVerse’s Meeting the Bar: Zen Poetry

I grieve
you say let go
I let go

The pain remains
you say un-attach
I un-attach

Tears fall
you say allow their fall
I allow their fall

Water cleanses
you say look below
I look below

Tether is gone
you say let it go
I let it go

Sky meets water
you say no beginning no end
I say no beginning no end

23 responses to “Grief”

  1. Perfect example of zen writing.

    Liked by 1 person

  2. This is wonderfully written. I love the circle of letting go but never letting go!

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Love the feeling of acceptance in this poem, Ami ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  4. It is so easy to advice and much harder to follow.

    Liked by 1 person

  5. This is so good. Touched my heart. Thank you!

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Thank you Grace. My very good, aged friend who is a Buddhist Monk, has been trying (in vain) to teach me for many, many years to let go and not hold on to attachments. Maybe I’m starting to get it. Merriest Holiday Season to you as well. 🥰

    Like

  7. This reads like a mantra for relaxation and embracing the present time. Thanks for joining in. Happy Holidays and Happy New Year.

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Beautiful Ami. KL ♥️

    Liked by 1 person

  9. Love the feeling to this piece. It’s more about acceptance than resignation, I find that very Zen. Have a great holidays see you next year

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you so much Rob! Happy Christmas and Merry New Year to you as well. 😊

      Like

  10. Ami this is truly beautiful and so moving thank you for sharing ❤

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Thank you for your lovely comments, great prompts and the gift of your time. 🙏

      Like

    2. You are so welcome 💕

      Liked by 1 person

  11. I was very moved by this poem Ami.

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a comment