One Night

PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot

In response to Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ Friday Fictioneers Challenge 02/10/23 to write a complete story in 100 words or less with a Beginning, Middle and End, using the picture prompt above.

He was tired. Frustrated. Angry and now, hopeful. She had left him a message. He didn’t know how she managed, yet each time he was on the very verge of giving up, she wrangled a way to drop a clue, leave a sign that he was on the right track. That she was still alive.

It had only been one night. An accidental meeting that had completely altered his life. They’d danced, eaten unfamiliar foods and tried a myriad of exotic tropical drinks. They had spent an otherworldly night together on his yacht, and then she was gone.

He hunted.

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23 responses to “One Night”

  1. Nan Falkner Avatar

    Only one MEMORABLE night! It was worth it! DON’T GIVE UP!

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      If it’s real – it’s worth fighting for!! 🙏

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  2. msjadeli Avatar

    Good job of leaving the story open to interpretation. He shouldn’t give up.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much Ms Jade! 🙏

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re very welcome, Ami.

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  3. poetisatinta Avatar

    This is exciting I want to know more 🙂

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you!! ❤️😉❤️

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  4. rochellewisoff Avatar

    Dear Ami,

    Oh those one night stands. Hope things work out for him.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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  5. Dale Avatar

    Nicely done, Gypsie. Kind of reminds me how a former boyfriend kept me around so long. Every time I was ready to leave, he up and got all romantic and stuff. Got old after awhile, though… (and I was younger and more naïve then, too!)

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Hi Dale and thank you. Yes, I’ve been in that situation as well. I will never understand that mindset to be sure. Thank you for reading and responding! 😊

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      1. Dale Avatar

        Thank goodness we mature and see the signs later on 😉

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  6. Bill Avatar

    Yikes. Another one and done story. Only this guy has a yacht. The dude needs to move on.
    Well told, Gypsie.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much Bill! 🤗

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  7. Sandra Avatar

    Sounds like she might be toying with him. Or maybe she genuinely does want him to find her. Nicely done.

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  8. James McEwan Avatar

    I think he feels cheated out of the moment and is being tested.

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  9. Mason Bushell Avatar

    Aww, hope they meet again. Well done.

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  10. Sadje Avatar

    I hope he finds her. ❤️

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