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POWER

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Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

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In response to The Skeptic’s Kaddish W3 Prompt #64 POWER
chosen by Sylvia

You hold the power
to bring me to my knees
You hold the power
to fly me to the stars

You have the power
to stay by my side
You have the power
to walk away for good

I own the power
to bend my knees for you
I own the power
to circle the universe for you

I give you the power
to stay with me always
I give you the power
to walk away from me

and bring me to my knees …

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14 responses to “POWER”

  1. lesleyscoble Avatar
    lesleyscoble

    I give you the power 🌹
    I love this.

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Leslie! 😊

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  2. murisopsis Avatar
    murisopsis

    I see the struggle of the power dynamic in the relationships we create in this verse. Love the unique take!

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much! 😊

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  3. ben Alexander Avatar
    ben Alexander

    I give you the power

    This is such a clever twist and turn in the poem, Ami! Fantastic!!

    Much love,
    David

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much David! 😊

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      1. ben Alexander Avatar
        ben Alexander

        Hi, Ami!

        Just wanna let you know that this week’s W3 prompt is now live!

        W3 Prompt #65: Wea’ve Written Weekly

        And it’s hosted by the amazing Sadje!

        Much love,
        David

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      2. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
        Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

        Thank you so much David! 😘

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        ben Alexander

        🤗

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  4. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    Oh so moving Ami. Love it’s poignancy

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Sadje! 😊

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        Sadje

        My pleasure

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  5. cognacproject Avatar
    cognacproject

    Beautifully written ❤

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much! 🙏

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