The Gloaming

In response to bwarren’s
The Sunday Whirl Wordle #645

A prayer whispered in the aged vestry,
drifts across stained glass windows,
rising with the aromatic smudge blessed by a robed one conjuring hope.

Grateful for the seeds of love,
filled with wonder as beautiful
images emerge offering second chances behind jaded, tired eyes.

Mere hours remain waiting,
waiting within the crowded vestibule,
hand in hand the followers
await the preordained gloaming.

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10 responses to “The Gloaming”

  1. Carol anne Avatar

    This is very profound! Well done! A great poem!

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  2. Nicole Smith Avatar

    You crushed that!

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  3. Sadje Avatar

    Excellent use of all the words Ami.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much Sadje! ☺️

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re most welcome. I hope you’re fine? Haven’t been posting for a few days?

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      2. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

        Thank you for asking Sadje. My pain levels have been over the top recently, making it hard to concentrate or sit still. I’ve also been submitting to several competitions and publications – fingers crossed! 💜💜💜

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      3. Sadje Avatar

        Take care, I hope you feel better soon. All the best for the submission

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      4. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

        Thank you Sadje. It’s a chronic condition, but I deeply appreciate your care and friendship!! 🙏❤️🙏

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      5. Sadje Avatar

        You’re most welcome. Same here my friend. 🥰🤗

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