Exiled

In response to bwarren’s Sunday Whirl Wordle #724

Babbling speech echoes
from beneath the piped water
Hands rap on invisible walls
exiled beneath the weight of oppression

Tree bark peels like disemboweled promises
while the snake slithers out of his heralded slot
A flock of sparrows circle the over-coiffed head
forming a false halo – leaving excrement in their wake

A brush of a pen and a nod of his head
the lions circle his den before hunting his prey
The echoes and cries of the people converge
their outrage subdued – the dictator lives on.

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12 responses to “Exiled”

  1. purplepeninportland Avatar

    “Tree bark peels like disemboweled promiseswhile the snake slithers out of his heralded slotA flock of sparrows circle the over-coiffed headforming a false halo – leaving excrement in their wake”

    I love this stanza!

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  2. JeanMarie Avatar

    Great images. But gotta say I like the second stanza the best because of that fourth line. hee hee

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Two of one mind in our thinking my Friend!! 😉

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much Love! ☺️

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      1. paeansunplugged Avatar

        My pleasure, dear. ❤️

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  3. Sadje Avatar

    Wonderful writing Ami. Very powerful poem

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re most welcome dear friend.

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