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Unseen

Written by

Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

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I sit here
invisible
In this little
bar
All alone
watching

Do they know I
watch
Would they
care
If they knew I
wrote

That it was them
here
On paper or
screen
That I record their
inattentiveness

To my invisibility?

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2 responses to “Unseen”

  1. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    Such a moving poem Ami.

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  2. JeanMarie Avatar
    JeanMarie

    I feel this poem very deeply. I have been invisible most of my life when it comes to dating. But the sad fact is that most women will become invisible when they reach a certain age. Great twist at the end.

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