Brutal

In response to NEWEPICAUTHOR’s Thursday Inspiration #303 Brutal

Brutal is the love

that can not be realized
Tortuous is the love
that must be denied

Ferocious is the pain
of love subdued forever
Merciless is the ache
of forbidden love

Savage is the pining
for everlasting love
Relentless is the thirst
for love’s committed kiss

Heartless was Cupid
directing love’s arrow
Ruthless was his aim
at these two lover’s hearts

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17 responses to “Brutal”

  1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    ((Hugs)) Cupid can be very cruel …. 💔

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  2. JeanMarie Avatar

    Too full of pain 😢

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      ((Giant Hugs my friend)) ❤️‍🩹

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  3. Sadje Avatar

    Wow! This really is heartbreaking poem Ami.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you for reading Sadje! 💘

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        Always my pleasure

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  4. poetisatinta Avatar

    This Cupid is indeed brutal 💔

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Yes, completely a-kilter! ❤️‍🔥

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  5. paeansunplugged Avatar

    Ami, I love the intensity of your verse.

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  6. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you for reading Willow! 💕

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  7. newepicauthor Avatar

    Cupid is the god of desire, affection and erotic love, but at times he could be brutal. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      You are most welcome!! 🙏

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