The Banshee (Short Version 54 Words)

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In response to Esther Chilton’s Can You Tell A Story In 54 Words? Use the following words in a poem or story: GERBIL, WONDERLAND, ZIP, AFTERSHAVE, BANSHEE

The banshee she hunted
each Halloween night
Released from the veil
into a wonderland of prey

She camouflaged her stink
with human aftershave
To find her a gerbil
to free her from a witch’s spell

Yet years had passed to her dismay
gerbil’s ran faster than lightning
and away they went
zip zip zip!



7 responses to “The Banshee (Short Version 54 Words)”

  1. This is super. You’ve clearly had a lot of fun. Thank you for joining in 😊

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    1. Hi Esther – yes I did! Thank you for hosting a fun prompt!! 😀

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  2. Haha! A fun scary story

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      1. You’re most welcome

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  3. those pesky fast gerbils!

    fun!

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