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Fading Light

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Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

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In response to the November Visual Poetry Prompt provided by Bartholomew Barker at Living Poetry


Light fades
the year passes by
Brilliant when new
dimming to hues of brown
in summer

Leaves fall
the circle continues to spin
Just before the end
myriads of colors clash together
in a magnificent climactic explosion

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11 responses to “Fading Light”

  1. Bartholomew Barker Avatar
    Bartholomew Barker

    Excellent work, Gypsie! Especially the second stanza. Thanks for writing to the November Visual Prompt from 2022.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much Bartholomew! 🙏

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  2. crazy4yarn2 Avatar
    crazy4yarn2

    Great minds – we both chose the same title!

    Your poem is beautiful, Ami!

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  3. poetisatinta Avatar
    poetisatinta

    Beautiful seasonal poem Ami 🍂

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you my friend! 😌

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      1. poetisatinta Avatar
        poetisatinta

        You are very welcome Ami 💕

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  4. paeansunplugged Avatar
    paeansunplugged

    Lovely!

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you P!! ☺️

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  5. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    What a beautiful poem Ami.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you my friend!! ☺️

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      1. Sadje Avatar
        Sadje

        You’re very welcome

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