Lingering Joy

In response to bwarren’s Sunday Whirl Wordle #737

Her human departed
left again
A sense of lingering joy
felt oddly sharp

In the place
where her heart resided
A piercing point of pain
forced her to sit

Instead of waiting and watching
him go
Full darkness enveloped her
and she left first

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4 responses to “Lingering Joy”

  1. Lisa Tomey-Zonneveld Avatar

    Oh, this is so relatable

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  2. JeanMarie Avatar

    Oh no! 😟 It’s a very good poem Gypsi, but sad

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  3. Carol anne Avatar

    a wonderful piece Ami! 🙂

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  4. shaun tenzenmen Avatar

    Given agency to oneself helps ease the pain. Nice write 👏

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