Blunt Truth

In response to bwarren’s Sunday Whirl Wordle #739

Envy flows like green fluid
along this beam of life
Ancient memories scroll
through our own subconscious
to shape a truth that no longer
works in the blunt truth
and shift of life in present day

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10 responses to “Blunt Truth”

  1. purplepeninportland Avatar

    Short and to the point, Ami. Well said.

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  2. Sadje Avatar

    Very well composed Ami.

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  3. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you most kindly Carol Anne!! 🙏

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  4. JeanMarie Avatar

    Excellent! Short, tight, impactful

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much JeanMarie! ❤️

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  5. pensitivity101 Avatar

    So good to see a post from you Ami. This is so good. You OK?

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you Di! Concentrating on working on pieces for publication, contests and such. Hope you and yours are doing ok? 🙏

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        We’re good thanks! Good luck!!!!!

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  6. Carol anne Avatar

    Absolutely awesome Ami! 🙂 🙏💜💜

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