My Shelter

In response to bwarren’s Sunday Whirl Wordle #746

You were my shelter
the rocks that formed my foundation
were lain by you

A step along the front line of defense
against the ravages of my flesh
leaving little more than a messy ghost behind

You rose to the fight
refusing to settle for the mere scrap
of woman I had become

You left unwillingly or perhaps willingly
who will ever know
not I as I lay here on the edge and tremble


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11 responses to “My Shelter”

  1. Carol anne Avatar

    stunning poem Ami! 💜💜

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you Carol Anne! ☺️

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  2. purplepeninportland Avatar

    I love where your line breaks were. Great poem!

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Much appreciated!!! 😌

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  3. poetisatinta Avatar

    Such a great contemplative poem Ami 💕

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so very much P!! 💙

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you Di! 🙏💕🙏

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  4. Sadje Avatar

    A very poignant poem Ami.

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re welcome dear friend

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