Brutal Loop

In response to bwarren’s Sunday Whirl Wordle #763

Drive up the gravel track
welcome home my love
Heaven has returned
the loop of happiness complete

Uncaring of how others judge
I do not tinker in their affairs
Their stream of brutal comments
end in silence within my heart

Bliss remains for hours
that string into days
Until once again your departure
precipitates the bounce of sadness

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4 responses to “Brutal Loop”

  1. JeanMarie Avatar

    Brutal loop indeed. Even when handed a random assortment of words you manage to find universality, truth, art

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  2. Sadje/ Sadie Avatar

    A very evocative poem Ami.

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  3. poetisatinta Avatar

    Momentary joy 🩷

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