Nibble

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By Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

Response to prompt word NIBBLE posted by Mish at dVerse Poet’s Club

44 word limit challenge

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The sunset washed over us as though the rays were liquid gold, intwining our slightly browned skin into one solid, substantial aura.

He was the one! I felt a warm nibble on my chilled ear. A woman moved toward us.

“Who’s that?”

“My wife.”

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17 responses to “Nibble”

February 8, 2022

Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

I am sure this will not end well… love the surprise.

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1. February 8, 2022
  
  Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris
  
  Thank you for reading my work Bjorn! Your work is exquisite! 😊
  
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February 8, 2022

writingwhatnots

Haha- I didn’t see that coming!

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1. February 8, 2022
  
  Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris
  
  Glad I surprised you and you enjoyed it! 😊
  
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February 8, 2022

ben Alexander

Oy vey! I wonder what sort of drama ensued 🙂

-David

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1. February 8, 2022
  
  Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris
  
  Hi David, I wouldn’t want to be in any of their sandals!
  
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February 8, 2022

Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

Thank you very Mish! 😊

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February 8, 2022

Carol Congalton

Oh no! Just when everything seemed great!

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February 8, 2022

Mish

A beautiful setting….until they are caught in the act and this quadrille takes a major turn. Nicely done.

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February 7, 2022

Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

Thank you Sadje! 😁

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February 7, 2022

Sadje

Oops! Good one Ami.

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1. February 8, 2022
  
  Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris
  
  Thanks Sadje! 😃
  
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February 7, 2022

Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

Thank you very much Arcadia! 😊

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February 7, 2022

Arcadia (@MissArcadia)

Well that love story didn’t end well. Nicely done poem.

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February 7, 2022

Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris

Oh my apologies! I’m not very good at this linking thing. Did this one work ok? Your prompts are definitely inspiring. Thank you for posting them. 😊

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February 7, 2022

fireblossom32

Hi Gypsie. You liked to my word list prompt last Monday but your link only led to a title page and no poem. No matter where I clicked, nothing more appeared, so i had to remove the link and I didn’t know how to let you know the link was not working.

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1. February 7, 2022
  
  Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris
  
  Hi. My apologies. I think I have fixed it now. Thank you for letting me know. 😊
  
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