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Response to K. Hartless Prompt and d’Verse Poets

Quadrille #146 I Live in Salt in 44 words only!

By Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

Oh Salt, sweet Salt!

How you do tempt me

Glistening on that raised rim

Dancing across the rolled top

of that monstrous Margarita glass

The golden hue of top-shelf tequila

shimmering within your sea green depths

Release me now from your ancestral hold!

4 Comments

  1. Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris says:
    February 22, 2022 at 3:01 am

    Thank you K. I will take your advice and do so immediately! 😊

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  2. K.Hartless says:
    February 21, 2022 at 11:28 pm

    Yummy, Ami. I can see the salty halo now. Something regal about it, no. This is wonderful. You should link it in the to the d’verse post. https://dversepoets.com/ They’re super sweet poetic souls.

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  3. Ami (Gypsie) Offenbacher-Ferris says:
    February 21, 2022 at 10:52 pm

    Thank you so much Bartholomew! That means a great deal to me! 😊

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  4. Bartholomew Barker says:
    February 21, 2022 at 10:50 pm

    Love those last two lines. Great work!

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