Salty Things

Response to K. Hartless Prompt and d’Verse Poets

Quadrille #146 I Live in Salt in 44 words only!

By Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

Oh Salt, sweet Salt!

How you do tempt me

Glistening on that raised rim

Dancing across the rolled top

of that monstrous Margarita glass

The golden hue of top-shelf tequila

shimmering within your sea green depths

Release me now from your ancestral hold!


  1. Love those last two lines. Great work!

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  2. Thank you so much Bartholomew! That means a great deal to me! 😊


  3. K.Hartless says:

    Yummy, Ami. I can see the salty halo now. Something regal about it, no. This is wonderful. You should link it in the to the d’verse post. They’re super sweet poetic souls.

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  4. Thank you K. I will take your advice and do so immediately! 😊


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