The Chalkboard

By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

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In response to De Jackson, aka whimsygizmo, host for dVerse Quadrille Monday. Prompt word CHALK used within a 44 word poem.

She stepped over the threshold
hesitant
Hanging in mid-air before her
a chalkboard
Her life’s history written in white chalk on the chalkboard
Detailed year by year and day by day minute by minute
Were those seconds delineated next to every single minute?

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10 responses to “The Chalkboard”

  1. Sherry Marr Avatar
    Sherry Marr

    A life’s history written in chalk…….intriguing.

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  2. ben Alexander Avatar

    This one feels… kinda spiritual to me, if that makes sense, Ami.

    Sincerely,
    David

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    1. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Yes, very. Thank you David! 🙏

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  3. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Hi Ms Jadeli – I sure hope my own arithmetic is correct!! ⚖️

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  4. msjadeli Avatar

    I have a feeling something like this setup will be right near the pearly gates and St. Peter will ask for an accounting. Over to the side is that big red elevator going straight down for the ones whose lives don’t add up. 😉

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  5. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you De! So happy you enjoyed it!

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  6. De Jackson Avatar
    De Jackson

    I like the spill of this, the isolated “hesitant” and “a chalkboard.” Adds to the intrigue.

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  7. (Gypsie) Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    writingwhatnots – Thank you! What a wonderful compliment your statement invokes! 😉

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  8. writingwhatnots Avatar

    This is intriguing Ami …

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