By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

In response to Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt and Challenge #280 Prompt Word Amok Challenge Write a poem or piece of prose in exactly 35 words.

My feelings run amok from day
to day and night to night.
One hour to one minute,
my heart swells to nearly bursting,
then tightens into an angry fist
and swells upon your first kiss.


  1. judeitakali says:

    So beautiful.


    1. really, really beautiful! I agree ❤


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  2. Bill says:

    Wonderfully done, Gypsie. Lots of back and forth emotion in this one.


  3. Sadje says:

    Very evocative poem Ami.

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      1. Sadje says:

        You’re welcome my friend

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  4. Sweet. Nicely done!

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