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Amok

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By Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

In response to Sammi Cox’s Weekend Writing Prompt and Challenge #280 – Prompt Word Amok Challenge Write a poem or piece of prose in exactly 35 words.

My feelings run amok from day
to day and night to night.
One hour to one minute,
my heart swells to nearly bursting,
then tightens into an angry fist
and swells upon your first kiss.

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9 responses to “Amok”

  1. judeitakali Avatar
    judeitakali

    So beautiful.

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    1. ben Alexander Avatar
      ben Alexander

      really, really beautiful! I agree ❤

      ~David

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  2. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
    Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

    Thank you Bill! 😊

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  3. Bill Avatar
    Bill

    Wonderfully done, Gypsie. Lots of back and forth emotion in this one.

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  4. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    Very evocative poem Ami.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar
      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Sadje! 😊

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        Sadje

        You’re welcome my friend

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  5. Susan St.Pierre Avatar
    Susan St.Pierre

    Sweet. Nicely done!

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Susan! 😊

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