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Lie Legacy

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Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

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In response to bwarren’s Sunday Whirl Wordle #722

Lies smell of demolished dreams
shaking chasms of arthritic hopes
Scam artists eager to turn
innocents into victims

Step into a legacy
of rich men’s promises
A chest full of empty emotion
sits molding with age

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9 responses to “Lie Legacy”

  1. purplepeninportland Avatar
    purplepeninportland

    Concise and wonderful poem!

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank so much!! 😊

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  2. JeanMarie Avatar
    JeanMarie

    wow! I love the first line. The whole poem packs a big punch with great economy. 👍

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much Jean Marie! Your critiques and support mean the world to me!! 🩵

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  3. Sadje Avatar
    Sadje

    Oh wow! So good Ami. 🫶🏼

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you so much Sadje! ☺️

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        Sadje

        You’re very welcome my dear friend

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    pensitivity101

    Nice one Ami.

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      Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris

      Thank you Di! 🙏

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