Secrets

In response to bwarren’s Sunday Whirl Wordle #736

Demons hold secrets close to their skin
once released the dragon flies free
A blink conjures the starless night
kindling hope in an airless room

Third time was not the charm
swallows pride and trudges on
More life behind than in front
angels fall hearing the toll

White is black and black is gray
lines are crossed in every way
Monsters eyes hide deceit
until all good is gone – complete

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10 responses to “Secrets”

  1. purplepeninportland Avatar

    This was haunting and well done, Ami!

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  2. Carol anne Avatar

    truly stunning Ami 🙂

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much Carol Anne!! 🙏🙏🙏

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  3. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Good take Ami. Wishing you a Merry Christmas.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you Di! ☺️ Merriest Christmas Day to you as well!!! 🤶

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  4. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Jean-Marie, Was a tough one, just started writing and although abstract – the personal metaphors bled through. Thank you. 💙❤️💙

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  5. Lisa Tomey-Zonneveld Avatar

    This is really interesting and well done

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you Lisa – I love Christmas … but the past few years have been tough fighting those demons! 🫣💙

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  6. JeanMarie Avatar

    Wow! That was a tough challenge but you did a great job giving .us a story on the dark side right in the middle of Christmas cheer.😎🙂

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