The Snowdrop Bush

In response to Bartholomew Barker’s
March Visual Poetry Prompt

He asked her to place
his most favorite plant
in front of his headstone
on the grave where he would lay

She remembered as she sprawled prone
upon the grassy hillside
of the aged little cemetery
how he’d looked into her green-gray eyes

How he’d implored her to put the bush just here
where it would grow so well
requesting that a year after his death she gather
a flower bouquet to deeply inhale it’s fragrance

In this way he explained with love
and utter undying devotion
she would remember him truly
and together they would be again

As the world around her darkened and she could
no longer feel the green grass at her back
she thought of the lovely Snowdrop blooms
still clutched in her stiffening hands

What’d he’d said was real and true she now knew
as she faded into darkness she found him waiting
standing at the door to eternity holding a tuft
of poisonous Snowdrop’s in his hand

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15 responses to “The Snowdrop Bush”

  1. Carol anne Avatar

    awesome Ami! 🙂 I loved it, but what an ending, I never saw that coming!

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  2. JeanMarie Avatar

    Yep. I also was delightfully shocked and creeped out by the ending. Great job.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you my friend! 💙

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  3. pensitivity101 Avatar

    Didn’t expect that ending Ami.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you for reading Di! 🙏

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      1. pensitivity101 Avatar

        You’re welcome

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  4. poetisatinta Avatar

    So tenderly written with an unexpected ending brilliant Ami 🙌

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you so much P! Very happy you enjoyed it! 😊

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  5. judeitakali Avatar

    captivating 🖤✍

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  6. Sadje Avatar

    I wasn’t expecting this ending. Well written Ami.

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    1. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

      Thank you my friend! 😊

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      1. Sadje Avatar

        You’re very welcome

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  7. Gypsie-Ami Offenbacher-Ferris Avatar

    Thank you Bartholomew!! 🤩

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  8. Bartholomew Barker Avatar

    Lovely and more than a little creepy. Well done, Gypsie!

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